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Monica P.'s avatar

I was hooked immediately.

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Richard Partridge's avatar

Thank you Monica - glad you enjoyed

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gery's avatar

Great pictures (and as always a cool tetx)

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Richard Partridge's avatar

Thanks Gery ... always appreciate your support

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

An open ending here. I like the freedom to choose which way this one goes. With the picture it leans towards one way and without it, anything goes. Will there be a follow up to this piece?

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Richard Partridge's avatar

Thank you Pilgrim - I always think that at some point I will go back to these super short pieces and try to turn them into more fully fleshed short stories ... at the moment there are so many other things competing for time!

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