Brilliant! Each stanza tells something different but you have connected them so well and it's a wonderful flow to this poem. Even though it talks about tinnitus and the voices or conversations going on inside. Love this! Where is that bridge in the photo?
Thank you - the connection just kind of happened - I think because I write a few of these each night they naturally connect with my general mood ... The bridge is Ross Bridge in my hometown of Penzance.
Thank you David - they are very much an internal dialogue ... but also quite 'aphoristic' in that I only truly believe most of them in the very moment they come out.
Brilliant! Each stanza tells something different but you have connected them so well and it's a wonderful flow to this poem. Even though it talks about tinnitus and the voices or conversations going on inside. Love this! Where is that bridge in the photo?
Thank you - the connection just kind of happened - I think because I write a few of these each night they naturally connect with my general mood ... The bridge is Ross Bridge in my hometown of Penzance.
Ah Penzance… I thought it reminded me of something.
These are great... all quite like an internal dialogue.. Especially like:
"Sometimes
a slight hint.
Usually,
just nothing."
Thank you David - they are very much an internal dialogue ... but also quite 'aphoristic' in that I only truly believe most of them in the very moment they come out.
That is brilliant, really interesting.
I love this, Richard. Tinnitus is a bitch, isn't it? My trouble is I think I'm infatuated with her. I'd miss her if she ever left me.
Hah! There's the Tinnitus in my ears and then all the other Tinnituses ( is that a word? ) surrounding us - some of which I would gladly be rid of!
In response to#3
An expectation is a resentment under construction. I am now free of all expectations.
I like your style.
I very much like that! Thanks Linda.
Really enjoyed this. Everyone’s comments were spot on. I agree so I’ll just say - me too.
Thank you Monica!
Impressive! Wonderful. I love this poem. You're so clever!
Thank you so my Francesca it's appreciated
I find this one of your best, Richard.
I was going to say the same!
That's very kind Gery ...