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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Something uneasy about this piece. Brilliant writing from cool calm collectedness to this. What a shift.

Richard Partridge's avatar

I like uneasy! That's what I think i'm looking for ... thank you!

J.S. Edwards's avatar

So good Richard! Compelling to read and a great ending

Richard Partridge's avatar

Thank you Julie - it always means so much to have such positive feedback.

Framing-the-Story w/AK's avatar

Great! Were you drinking the night before?

Richard Partridge's avatar

Never really thought that - but now I'm worried about the number of times I've turned up hungover or still drunk from the night before, at my desk back in the days...

CansaFis Foote's avatar

...fun sci-fi brother..."we've all been there before" come to life...

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I have had dreams along these lines, Richard. Why do I wake feeling uneasy about doing something I never did?

Richard Partridge's avatar

Likewise - and then the relief that you haven't ...

jacob silverman's avatar

Even just looking at the picture, I get an immediate favorable impression about you. And I still did not read it, but I want you to know how I think. I will read it now. For me it was just the immediate reaction to the photo you used

Richard Partridge's avatar

I'm glad you liked the picture - I hope you enjoyed the story too!