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Something uneasy about this piece. Brilliant writing from cool calm collectedness to this. What a shift.
So good Richard! Compelling to read and a great ending
Great! Were you drinking the night before?
...fun sci-fi brother..."we've all been there before" come to life...
I have had dreams along these lines, Richard. Why do I wake feeling uneasy about doing something I never did?
Even just looking at the picture, I get an immediate favorable impression about you. And I still did not read it, but I want you to know how I think. I will read it now. For me it was just the immediate reaction to the photo you used
Something uneasy about this piece. Brilliant writing from cool calm collectedness to this. What a shift.
So good Richard! Compelling to read and a great ending
Great! Were you drinking the night before?
...fun sci-fi brother..."we've all been there before" come to life...
I have had dreams along these lines, Richard. Why do I wake feeling uneasy about doing something I never did?
Even just looking at the picture, I get an immediate favorable impression about you. And I still did not read it, but I want you to know how I think. I will read it now. For me it was just the immediate reaction to the photo you used