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Yes... you could not resist because that particular shoe shop is the innocent looking front for a government compliance agency developing contactless AI-brain control of free will...!🤖🤪

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Hmm..... This could be an opening of a spy novel, although I don't really get an espionage vibe, a murder mystery or a mixture of both OR a story about a missing person. But it's very intriguing. MORE, perhaps ?

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I often think I should come back to these .... make them a little more rounded ... fifteen minutes isn't long lol!

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I thought about saying " Remember Hemingway ", but things didn't turn out very well for him. No, not a VERY GOOD example for ANY writer.

But didn't he write a very short story that's in the record books as such ? I seem to remember that.

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