Really nice. Aprceiate the structure and the meter, but curious what the reasoning was behind letting this line hang alone -- "The mechanism of my understanding of all of this"?
Thank you Alex - It kind of just gave a pause I think - i'm not really one for really pushing the rhyme too much and this felt like I'd done quite a bit of that
This is
the bliss.
Gracias
Really nice. Aprceiate the structure and the meter, but curious what the reasoning was behind letting this line hang alone -- "The mechanism of my understanding of all of this"?
Thank you Alex - It kind of just gave a pause I think - i'm not really one for really pushing the rhyme too much and this felt like I'd done quite a bit of that