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The rain

Richard Partridge
Mar 14, 2023
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I watched you dance the rain.
Lithe movements to its rhythmic fall.
Splintered fragments of flowing translation,
physically spoken, focus blurred.

I was not looking, by the way.
Not watching what was there. 
But sensing our intentions met 
in this evocative flow, somewhere.

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Mar 15Liked by Richard Partridge

Quite a provocative and enticing play on words to set the mood and scene you captured, for our hearts to dwell upon, and the reel-to-reel old movies that beckon us to replay the incredible few moments we’ve experienced in our own lives, reminiscent of the ones you’ve beautifully set to motion with words.

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